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Haiku

“Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.”

This information has been sourced fromHAIKU for PEOPLE http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/?

How to write Haiku
In japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems. Anyway, let's take a look at the basic knowledge:

What to write about?
Haiku-poems can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated for normal PEOPLE's recognition and understanding. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation.

The metrical pattern of Haiku
Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In japanese, this convention is a must, but in english, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.

The technique of cutting
The cutting divides the Haiku into two parts, with a certain imaginative distance between the two sections, but the two sections must remain, to a degree, independent of each other. Both sections must enrich the understanding of the other.
To make this cutting in english, either the first or the second line ends normally with a colon, long dash or ellipsis.

The seasonal theme.
Each Haiku must contain a kigo, a season word, which indicate in which season the Haiku is set. For example, cherry blossoms indicate spring, snow indicate winter, and mosquitoes indicate summer, but the season word isn't always that obvious.”

Buson, Yosa. (1716-84).

  • At the over-matured sushi,
    The Master
    Is full of regret.
  • Pressing Sushi;
    After a while,
    A lonely feeling

 

Murakami, Kijo. (1865-1938).

  • First autumn morning:
    the mirror I stare into
    shows my father's face.
  • The moment two bubbles
    are united, they both vanish.
    A lotus blooms.
     

The following are my Haikus.

This is a selection of three Haikus on the same theme .
Weather
 


Fog

On the mountain top
The fog fell down thick and fast
It was like pea soup.


Rain

Tip-tap goes the rain.
As it hits the window pane
I can hear the rain.


Hail

They fell in showers.
Like diamonds upon the ground
Big hailstones were found.

By Paul McCann