"Symphony in Brown" by Peter Elliott

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I look intently
At my jacket
Draped uniquely
'Cross a chair
Joe Cocker creeping sub-audible
Underneath the door.

Lines arc 'n arch
Parabolize
Endless contoured convolutions

Towered above
By rugged range
Of ruffled sleeve
Careless thrown

Draped unnatural
Weirdly still

Haunting clinks of rusted chain
Midnight ticks of watching clock.

It sleeps
Like a warped brown cat
Dragging the chair over
not succeeding.

It hangs
like a cliff-face
Claws and gropes
With frantic bleeding fingertips.

Lying simultaneous limp as a dead leaf
Relaxing on the ground.

And yet it is true I have to say
It's the same one I wear  Every day.


This jacket tilts my mind
Raising dizzy curtains
Memories of Salvador Dali.

A leaping dolphin over chair
Stopped in mid-flight.

Chaotic ordered disorder
Knocks that knock
When no-one's there.

But
Enough of empty imagery
Dismiss the futile metaphor.

It's strangely,
Beautifully,
Significant in its own right.

Fountain feathers trailing free.

Could call it Grace
Or Struggle,
Ecstasy or Torment.

The time it now does six o'clock be
I put on my jacket  And go to tea.

It nags like the restless ocean
Persistent, relentlessly,
In its smooth rough-shaped mystery.

   ---(Peter Elliott)---
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