Thesis, antithesis,
prosthesis
James Ley
J.M.
Coetzee
Slow Man
Knopf, $45 hb, 266 pp, 1741660688
SLOW
MAN begins with an accident. Paul Rayment
is cycling along an Adelaide street when he is
struck by a car. When he emerges from a daze of
doctors and painkillers, he discovers his life
has been transformed by this random event. His
crushed leg is amputated above the knee. From
now on, he will require the attention of a full-time
nurse to help with lifes most basic chores;
his limited mobility will mean he is rarely able
to venture forth from his small flat.
The first third of Slow Man takes the reader
through the aftermath of the accident. It is a
disciplined and quite masterful piece of psychological
realism. Coetzees prose is, as always, a
model of clarity and understatement; its rhythms
are carefully measured but insistent. Paul struggles
to be reconciled to his new, unwished-for existence.
His bitterness and anger gradually give way to
loneliness, which in turn begins to manifest itself
in the form of an increasing infatuation with
his carer, a sensible and efficient Croatian woman
named Marijana.
There is just a hint of Beckettian allegory behind
the realism. Pauls symbolic emasculation
and his immobility are accompanied by an awareness
of the physical world closing in. On this level,
Slow Man begins as a novel about the tribulations
of ageing; more specifically, it sets out to ex-plore
the psychology of an ageing male sexuality. This
theme has made a notable appearance in Coetzees
previous work. In Disgrace (1999), the
university professor David Lurie like Paul
Rayment a gentleman of a certain age believes
he has solved the problem of sex rather
well, only to embark upon an ill-judged
affair with a student, which destroys his career.
In Slow Man, the emphasis is on Pauls
under-lying frustration, the quiet desperation
behind which we might detect the unappeasable
spectre of death, and the way this dimly understood
anxiety can lead a man to act foolishly. There
is a sense in which Pauls awkward sexuality
becomes an expression of a kind of absurdism:
a longing for connection and release that only
serves to underscore his inevitable isolation
and decline. Coetzees debt to Samuel Beckett
has often been noted; I believe it was Beckett
who observed that a mans sexual longing
never really goes away, it just becomes less and
less appropriate.
Curiously, the first third of Slow Man
turns out to be something of a red herring. There
is the subtlest hint of what is to come when Paul,
divorced and childless, reflects on a life that
now feels to him like a missed opportunity. If
none is left to pass judgement on such a life,
he thinks, if the Great Judge of All has
given up judging and with-drawn to pare his nails,
then he will pronounce it himself: A wasted chance.
The clue is in the lines allusion to James
Joyce. In A Portrait of the Artist as a Young
Man (1916), Joyces fictional alter ego,
Stephen Dedalus, argues that the artist, like
the God of creation, remains within or behind
or beyond or above his handiwork, invisible, refined
out of existence, indifferent, paring his fingernails.
As high-literary allusions tend to do, this knowing
echo points to the tension between the novels
realism and its carefully crafted formality. Pauls
suggestion that there is no overarching moral
purpose to his life paradoxically draws attention
to the very thing it is denying: the fact that
his fate is in the hands of an invisible, controlling,
authorial power. However purposeless his existence
may feel, the narrative of his life is unavoidably
encumbered with significance.
The definitive rupture in Pauls narrative
occurs with the appearance on his doorstep of
Elizabeth Costello, the heroine of Coetzees
previous novel. Admirers of Elizabeth Costello
(2003) will recall that its title character is
an elderly writer whose most famous book, The
House on Eccles Street, is a reworking of
Joyces Ulysses (1922). Her forceful
personality swiftly imposes itself upon Paul.
Though they have not met previously, she seems
to know a great deal about him already. She begins
explaining his thoughts and feelings to him as
if she knows him better than he knows himself.
She badgers him about being lacklustre and uninteresting.
She appropriates Pauls story, demanding
he take action to give his life a more purposeful
and dramatic shape.
The Costello woman, as Paul comes
to think of her, is not simply a disruptive influence
in Pauls life; she tears up the fabric of
the novel. Her overbearing presence gives Slow
Man a metafictional jolt that affects its
entire structure. The novel ceases to be fiction
and becomes, suddenly, many fictions. The writing
itself becomes more overtly literary,
as all the potentially meaningful, symbolic elements
of the narrative, which were previously submerged,
are dragged to the surface. In one strange and
fascinating scene, stage-managed by Costello,
Paul is visited by a blind woman named Marianna.
The scene is full of allusions, particularly to
Shakespeare: Marianna not only represents a Shakespearean
doubling of Marijana, her name and her narrative
function are an obvious reference to the character
of Mariana in Measure for Measure. Costellos
purpose in bringing the couple together is seemingly
to draw out correspondences and create symbolic
moments that make Pauls life more comprehensible
and thus push along his sense of self-awareness.
She has, in effect, come uninvited into Pauls
life to give him the moral structure that he felt
was lacking. This, she argues, is something literature
provides. Nothing that happens in our lives
is without a meaning, Paul, she says, as
any child can tell you. That is one of the lessons
stories teach us, one of the many lessons.
Elizabeth Costello is right in a sense. As any
literary critic can tell you, nothing happens
in a story that is not meaningful. There are no
accidents in fiction; if a detail is mentioned,
however inconsequential it may seem, it is axiomatic
that it is mentioned for a reason. But it is in
this way that fiction is not like life, which
is experienced as a flow of irrelevant detail.
The transubstantiation of shapeless existence
into narrative is the overriding subject of Slow
Man, and the motivation behind the sometimes
heavy-handed meta-fictional games it plays. The
name of God is often invoked in the novel, but
read through a Joycean lens this is a God conflated
with the idea of the creating, controlling author.
There is a religious or rather quasi-religious
aspect to narrative. It shapes experience
and gives it purpose, but it also falsifies reality
in the process. The archetypal patterns and echoes,
which are an inevitable part of any narrative,
are seen to be a symptom of the existential dilemma
of being a rational creature in an irrational
universe.
Slow Man is a compelling but occasionally
ungainly attempt to confront this paradox in the
way we understand the world. The question is one
of authority, in every sense: the fact that meaning
is something created. Paul has a collection of
historical photographs, which he treasures as
an authentic record, an embodiment of the past.
The camera, with its power of taking in
light and turning it into substance, we
are told, has always seemed to him more
a metaphysical than a mechanical device.
But the novel also suggests there is something
illusory about this belief in authenticity. Paul
is horrified when Marijanas son, Drago,
alters one of his precious images using a computer.
Marijana, however, is less concerned. Original
is copy already, she shrugs. Each
becomes a new thing, a new real, new in the world,
a new original.
Metafiction is, ultimately, a snake that swallows
its own tail. Recently, however, the American
novelist David Foster Wallace has pursued the
connection between metafiction and metaphysics
with an Ahab-like intensity that, through its
sheer intellectual energy, begins to crack the
artifice and reveal the despairing human subject
beneath. Wallaces garrulous style is drastically
unlike Coetzees austere fiction, but there
is a thematic affinity evident in Elizabeth Costello
and, now, Slow Man. Elizabeth Costello defines
writing as second thoughts to the power
of n. The act of writing, in other words,
is a form of self-awareness that admits no final
resting point. The logic of narrative must constantly
undermine its own order if it is to retain its
capacity to examine the human condition.
The manner in which these ideas are explored in
Slow Man is lugubriously ironic. There is an argument
run-ning through the novel between Paul and Elizabeth
Costello about genre. Costello insists that Pauls
life is a comedy. Losing any part of the
body that sticks out, she asserts, is
comic. Of course, she gets her way in the
end. It is even implied, as the novel approaches
its resolution, that the entire exercise has been
a joke at Pauls expense. Costello cautions
him about taking everything so seriously. When
she delivers a passionate speech urging Paul to
live more like a hero, she advises him to sally
forth courageously like Don Quixote. It is an
odd choice of role model: Quixote is, after all,
insane. Later, when Paul, in a Freudian moment,
suggests that jokes have a relationship to the
unconscious, Costello replies in kind that sometimes
a joke is just a joke.
There is something parodic about Elizabeth Costellos
moralising, which is heavily ironised by the books
multi-layered structure. Elizabeth Costello
attracted some criticism for being under-fictionalised,
the suggestion being that the title character
was a vehicle for Coetzees opinions which
allowed him to evade moral responsibility. It
would be a brave critic to so casually conflate
Coetzee and Costello after reading Slow Man.
In a sense, this consciously over-fictionalised
novel might be read as a retort to those critics:
a reminder that the morality of fiction is itself
ironic.
When a novel begins drawing attention to its fictional
qualities, openly discussing philosophical questions
about representative art and canvassing the options
for its own resolution, it is often at the price
of a certain formal awkwardness. Slow Man
is a flawed novel, but one that is fascinatingly
flawed. It is a work that has been deliberately
and calmly disfigured by its creator as a way
of exploring the ethics of its own narrative practices.
For there is, significantly, another level to
Slow Man. Silence can be full of meaning,
as Paul tells Marijana, and there is a telling
silence at the heart of the novel. Ultimately,
it is necessary to take a step back and remind
ourselves that the author of Paul Rayments
fate is not Elizabeth Costello but J.M. Coetzee,
who is everywhere and nowhere in this book. He
is, like the God of creation, refined out of existence,
invisible, paring his fingernails.
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